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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: ThatDarnmechanic#5997
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Giving OOC knowledge to your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Playing solely for the sake of power, with a disregard for the story.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Demeter blows out his cheeks, shading his eyes to fully take in the city's majesty. "Seven Skies, I didn't know it was physically possible to build walls that big!" Catching the gentleman's words, he touches his cap in greeting accompanied with a cheery grin. "Thank you kindly, sir. Hit it right first time, truth be told - officially it's business, but" He glances about conspiratorially before chuckling. "This is more about the experience than the minus. You the harbourmaster 'round here?.."


Character Name: Demeter Larch
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Tousled brown hair, mellow green eyes and matching neckscarf, quaintly rugged attire.
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It seems you misunderstood a couple of things....
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-> It seems you've misunderstood what to write under 'Character Bio', so see to your mailbox about more information about that, until now;

-> Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

-> Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

-> Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming


 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord Sora#7125 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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  🌑 Denied 🌑

Changes were not made within the 24 hours given

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-> 24 Hours for corrections are up.

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Sora#7125, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F.

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

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