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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Supra#6946
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Report to mod or simply just walk away
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It disturbs fair roleplay by bringing it things people may be uncomfortable with
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

"Its hard to explain as I do not remember much but all I remember is I am related to "mustang" and I have a purpose and a love of building ships/water transportation".


Character Name: Britannica
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 15
Physical Description: 6 feet tall, Athletic build, decent jawline, scars on my arms from past ship building,
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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character between 18-100 years. 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

You picked Halfling! Unfortunately, Halflings can only be a maximum of 3'3" tall. If you would like to learn more about this race, look here:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199097-core-race-lore-halflings/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character between 18-100 years. 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

You picked Halfling! Unfortunately, Halflings can only be a maximum of 3'3" tall. If you would like to learn more about this race, look here:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199097-core-race-lore-halflings/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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