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Blacksmith52
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: therealblacksmith52
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use descriptive actions but don't provide a conclusion (i.e., "jeff swings his fist at john, trying to knock him out" vs "jeff knocks out john")
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It breaks the illusion and suspension of disbelief
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Skasgraer Fieryaxe
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: A dwarvish man, perhaps a half-dwarf, with a short-cropped brown beard and close-cut hair. He has dark sinewy skin and wears stone-textured clothing
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I sit down on the dirty cushion uncomfortably. It's strange here. I look around nervously. Soon I tell her the truth: I came across this village by pure accident as I wandered through the wilderness.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

→ Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

→ Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.

→ Your skin isn’t up to our server standards. Please change this, and feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive.
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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