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eldrish
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Blankchemicall#8489
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having a discussion with the person and try too explain what they are doing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: because you could say out of roleplay im in etc etc and then they would know and come and kill you
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 

expecting me huh ok ill play your game hag my village was attacked by humans there was 45 of us now its only me i was only 12 i watched my mother and father die in front of my eyes the most i remember before they took there last breath "takes a slow deep breath, was the fire everywhere and my mother using her last breath too say run and i did i after 4 days after i had ran from the village i passed out from exhaustion i woke up a day later in a cage on a slave wagon i dont remember much of my time there i got bought put into an arena and had too fight too eat i eventually earned my freedom hence my scars it was brutal i fought for my life for 8 years straight when i got out i wandered aimlessly reading books and teaching myself too write and battling anyone and anything i found searching for purpose i eventually found this place which takes us too now


Character Name: eldris
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: he is a bulky green orc with a scar on his chest and on his eye with black hair he has short hair he is 7.2 he weighs 18 pounds dark blue eyes
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your Roleplay scenario, I see that you have a large reply but there is no proper stop. Please go back and apply the necessary edits.  

-When replaying, please separate the character's speech from action. For dialogues use "quotations

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your Roleplay scenario, I see that you have a large reply but there is no proper stop. Please go back and apply the necessary edits.  

-When replaying, please separate the character's speech from action. For dialogues use "quotations

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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