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Bloodhairs

Bloodhairs

By Bloodhairs

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: _bloodhairs
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I keep incharacter and remember to respect everyones elses experience too
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: yes it should be kept fair for others
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Bloodhairs
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: covered in burns and scars, tall build scruffy hair and ragged clothes
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: I sit and catch my breath, "I come from the north, everyone was forced to run"

I look around first before releavling burns to my left arm and leg. "we will get them back"

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if you character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question.

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if you character doesn't speak on it

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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