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BloqueCubito2007

By BloqueCubito2007

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: NilGarcia89#4498
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is having a goal for you, your role, and your character within the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is role, and taking advantage of the fact that it is a fantasy world, actions are carried out that you would not do in real life but respecting your role and your character
    Status: Denied 
I grew up in a financially stable but very weak love home ... My mother died when I was 68 years old, that is, last year and I have not yet overcome her ... At 21, she fought with her father because he He left home, his father left his arm like a wrinkled sleeve and broke his father's leg. From there I left home and was raised by a family of snow elves. My dad was a bandit, all the money and the food I eat was stolen from an snow elfes family. I don’t like our life, because the elf family we were stealing was the family that born me 

 
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Character Name: Dorbokomm
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 69
Physical Description: An ogre with prominent teeth quite tall and stocky. He has a slightly deformed arm because of a fight with his father when he was 21 years old
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! There’s no need to describe why you have certain physical features in your physical description. 

→ Your roleplay scenario isn’t a roleplay scenario, it’s a backstory. Your roleplay scenario must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

→ You can’t claim to be too good at something. (Ex: an excellent fighter.) If you want to be excellent or an expert at something then you’ll have to do so in rp when you join.

→ Ogre’s aren’t the same things as Orcs. You can’t apply to be an Orc and say your character is an Ogre in your physical description.

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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