BoatmanOnFire

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Definition of roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help!  

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. 

• Your Character Name includes that of a star wars character.  Please fix this.

• Your Character Biography states that your character witnessed the rise and fall of the Galactic Republic.  This does not follow server lore.  Feel free to reference the wiki for assistance.

• Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks state that he has a 500+ IQ.  This is Powergaming.  Please refer to the Powergaming rules.

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

• Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue. Please be sure to add one!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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