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Bobfreshy224

By Bobfreshy224

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: FreshBoi#8463
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you carry out unfair or unrealistic actions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it's information acquired out of character
    Status: Denied

I'm trying to survive in the wild with some friends and all that's left is some wood to stay warm at night. My parents died when I was 13 and I went home to see if my friends parents were alive but they weren't so we had to run and we ended up in the wild.

Character Name: bororond
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: shaggy blond hair, cyan eyes, muscular and buff, 6ft. and 10in., tunics paired with breeches
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help "> 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • You must explain your character's biggest fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be written in third person.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message JokerLow! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at JokerLow#6666

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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