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    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge that was obtained outside the current situation to benefit yourself.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making your character overpowered, and not allowing other players a chance to role play.
    Status: Denied

Pipi Zao grew up in the harsh desert plains with his clan. His family was a prominent weapon maker of the finest weapons, if you were to judge cruel weapons meant for crushing and tearing enemies apart. After a failed raid in wood elf territory, Pipi Zao had their tongue gouged out by the elf Elric Softwood and was forced to follow Elric as a slave. He now plots to try and escape from his master, either by killing him or just running away, all to get back to his cruel homeland because his desire for bloodshed is constantly growing.


Character Name: Pipi Zao
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: A greenish goblin, covered in rags. He follows his master never speaking a word.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Note that mentioning orc and wood elf isn't considered as a lore reference.

 

✦ Most elves would not normally enslave other people, especially not orcs since enslavement is frowned upon in their culture. Consider changing that part to something else.

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions.

 

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