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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using out side information to cheat
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: finding shortcuts
    Status: Denied

Zuri is originally from the Rasdom of Melle in a small isolated village. At the age of 15, Zuri was put into an arranged marriage by her father, to marry a man from a different tribe in order to maintain peace between the two. Desperate to avoid conflict, Zuri does not complain. After relocating to her husband village, she met with hostility and verbal abuse. She endures this for ten years. When he husband that has been protecting her dies of a sudden illness, she is left unprotected by the village folk and the verbal abuse has turned to physical abuse. She soon decides that she needs to leave and start a new life north. 


Character Name: Zuri
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Zuri is dark-skinned with long black hair and green eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For the following reason(s):


 

Ø  Both of your definitions are wrong. I want you to carefully read through the links I will provide below, and use that information to both rewrite your current explanations of these terms, and provide an example for each one of them.

 

Ø  The timeline of your biography is a bit off. The Rasdom Of Melle was situated in the previous realm of Lotc, Atlas. Currently we are in the year 1717, on the realm Arcas. The realm Arcas was first played on in the in game year 1705. Your character’s arranged marriage would’ve occured in 1704, when taking her age and the current year into account. Therefore, she would’ve only lived in the village for one year, because it is then that the migration to Arcas took place.

 

I want you to change your character’s age, or perhaps the events which took place in her life so they properly line up with the above information. When changing this, I also want you to make your biography a bit longer, and add atleast one more reference to the server lore. Below are a list of links which should help you to find lore fitting with your character, but I highly recommend you visit the various other pages of the wiki too!

 

  • Arcas, the current realm.
  • Atlas, the previous realm. Since the migration to Arcas happened recently, your character would’ve been born here!
  • Human lore. Your character would best fall into the “Farfolk” subrace, so make sure you read the section of them carefully!

 

Ø  I would like for your interesting facts to be changed a bit, and for one of them to made into a clear weakness.

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

 

You can join our New Player Discord– Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

 

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Your application has been


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The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.


 

You may reapply immediately, but please take some time to fix all of the requested changes.


 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), my forum account, or on the server (marb121).


You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community.

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