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Jaime Lannister

By Jaime Lannister

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Jamie#1696
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming, often also referred to simply as 'Meta', is the use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions.
    Status: Denied

*burps* swig of wine ."he-*burps*llo chappy im looking for a bit opf silver you know where a man of my stature can find some coin?

Character Name: Jaime Lannister
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Short,stocky,rosy cheeks due to constant drinking and pale skin
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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Name is not appropriate for LoTC. Please change it!

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.


 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message CanadaMatt. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ 10matthewc9#9809

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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