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BonesXones

By BonesXones

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: 🍄BonesXones🍄#1717
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is used when someone uses real-life knowledge in a game to determine the characters actions, the character wouldn't have any knowledge of these circumstances.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To maximize progress to reach one's goal.
    Status: Denied

I've come here for a quest of light, I eye the man up cautiously. Not wanting him to know my full plans, I raise my hand to him to greet him with a handshake and then head off deeper into the city.

Character Name: Xavier Bones
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A tall lengthy figure who wears a white cracked skull mask, apparel is black gloves and black/white suit with a silk red tie.
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sarahbarah

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's village was wiped out by orcs. This is a common character trope, so please be sure to edit this!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person! Ex: 'He waves' instead of 'I wave'

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Keep in mind that your character cannot start off with any magical artifacts, so please be sure to remove this from your Character Biography if the artifacts are magical!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message sarahbarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at sarahbarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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