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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: agni#5894
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having more knowlege than u should have in the rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: while fighting another person u use techniques that give u the advantage
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

i show him the broken blade "hey dumbass  i need a sword i broke mine. !" with a fierce look on his face. he shows him  the sword,. asking for directions "look i just want to go out and train again!" as he yells at the man. and when he finally gets his directions he curses at the man and walks away to go find a new sword.
 

Character Name: Guts
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: strong and missing a eye has black armor on with a long cape
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.
  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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