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By thoren

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: knowing things about another player who told them about themselves like there life
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing unbelievable things like taking down a 1000 players vs you or sneaking into the most heavily guarded castle in the world
    Status: Denied

i will tell him i am here for adventure and a new beginning then i will ask him if he wants to join then continue on 

Character Name: thoren
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: he is very swift and skilled with swords and bows but he is a picky eater and will not eat uncooked meat unless its fish
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HobbitForHire

Changed Status to Pending

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.
  • It looks like you've added a Personality Quirk to the Physical Description. Please change this so the Personality Piece is only about personality, and the Physical Piece is only physical
  • Remember that you can Edit this post, rather than creating a new one also!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is HobbitForHire#6479!

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HobbitForHire

Changed Status to Denied

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the pending message!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is HobbitForHire#6479! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

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