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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞#0879
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: playing the game using information that you got not from the game or in not Unintentional way example: going into somewhere using the map in the wiki and not in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: giving you character to much power example: and i cut the orc in a half with one swing
    Status: Denied

i was on the beach waiting for the boat to come to start my adventure my teacher came to talk to me he said "well i was great to teach you" i said "i am thankful that i got such a teacher" i can see he's eyes shine in the dark like he was so close to crying i said "well its hard to say goodbye" he said "well you should go" i heard him making a noise like a crying and i left

 

 

Character Name: Lansonn
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 42
Physical Description: white skin with white hair and aqua eyes 6.2 feet tall
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? 

  • Your Character Biography is missing links between the various topics. Please make sure that it forms one backround story. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Roleplay Definiton does not awnser the question if you have roleplayed before, please change this accordingly. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is not of the right scenario, please use the one provided in the box. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
    https://app.grammarly.com/ 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ snoopie12#8195]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message snoopie12 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

 

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