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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Probly_Poison#7640
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: breaking char. to do whatever you want
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being unrealistically powerful
    Status: Denied

[The marching of half-giants can be heard a mile away from the inside of the tavern]

“Everyone, get to your homes!” says Sven, a veteran – having fought many during his time as a militiaman 

“whash ah yoou taakin aboot, Sven” says the local drunk

[Sven, grabbing the man by the collar – drags him out of the pub]

“I said, go!” [grabbing his sword and shield – Sven hurries around the corner, directly towards the half-giants] 

 

Character Name: sven
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 100
Physical Description: dirty blonde, short, cut, flannel (rough wool) brown eyes (left eye messed up from battle)
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AnonymousAlexa

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Character Biography states that your character killed half giant raiders. Half giants are not a race on LotC and doing this singlehandedly would be powergaming.

 

→ Your character biography states that your character is a hero in his home village. Unfortunately, your character is not permitted to be well-known.

 

→ Your character biography states that your character has met faries. Unfortunately, faries are not a race on LotC.

 

→ Your roleplay example contains powergaming. Please fix this!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord AnonymousAlexa#3562 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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AnonymousAlexa

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to you have not fixed the changes within 24 hours.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AnonymousAlexa#3562, and I recommend you join the 

New Player Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

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