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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is knowing stuff and useing it even when you character does not know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: you force something on someone (most likely bad)
    Status: Denied

Character Name: flare
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: flare - for being 18 he is still small (4.7 ft) but dont you dare underestimate him (im going to try for most fire attacks) his Aura is red like fire
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♥ Your biography is quite short and it has a lot of grammatical errors. If you could try to add more information in, and perhaps see if you could find and fix some of those grammatical errors also. Maybe also explain why his name isn't anymore Cody?

 

♥ You aren't allowed to start with any form of magical abilities. You may put that your character wishes to learn those someday, but not that he has any abilities with magic

 

♥ Your race doesn't really fit the height of the character. Your characters current height would most likely fit with the dwarf race better. As so I suggest you could make him a little bit taller. Perhaps look from the Wiki page that how tall are the highlanders usually?

 

♥ " but dont you dare underestimate him (im going to try for most fire attacks) his Aura is red like fire" Please edit that off from character description, and for example just tell what color hair and eyes he has?

 

♥ Interesting facts part can't either include text that makes it seem like your character uses magic. Also interesting facts should include at least one weakness of the character

 

♥ Your skin doesn't quite fit to the server theme, so please try to get that skin changed as fast as possible, as you mentioned in the comments yourself!

 

You have 24 hours to make the required changes!

 

I recommend you to read more of the highlander race, and other server lore from the Wiki !

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord , where we have a lot of people that can surely assist you, if you ever have any questions!

 

You can of course also directly contact me at all times, here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

 

Good luck!

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Your application has been:

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You didn't make the required changes in the given time.


You may re-apply in 3 hours!

 

Before reapplying, I recommend you to read up some more server lore from the Wiki !

If you have any questions, you may contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

You may also ask for assistance in The New Player Discord !

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