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Caddyy

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Aleksa_#0715
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using real life informations for in game benefit.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when something is possible in game but not in real life.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

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Character Name: Alexos
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: My character is 185 cm high and weighs about 80 kg. He has a black hair and dark green eyes. He is a fit gentleman.
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  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography mentions ‘Christianity’ and ‘Serbia’ which are not mentioned in our server’s lore. However, ‘Christianity’ closely resembles our ‘Canonism’. You may read more about it here if you wish to incorporate this faith into your character’s backstory: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Church_of_the_Canon

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response was not answered! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:

 

→ Well over twenty-four hours have passed without any changes being made.


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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