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CaptainSteve457

By CaptainSteve457

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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: CaptainSteve457#9299
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is where lets say you know that the person in front of you is a killer but think of it this way your character in game is separate from you he knows less stuff than you do but you play as that character pretending or in roleplay not knowing he is a killer so lets say you die from him fully so no coming back you wont then make another character and just kill the killer for killing the character its when you know something that you character doesn't and you shout in act it into you character its hard to explain (going out of charictor)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using a advantage like making your character as op as possible or lets say someone in discord sys going to the bank now don't use that for a advantage by calling someone to help just get ready for roleplay don't use it in a way to have a advantage if you want to lets say you find a "note" that says there coming you have to agree to that because that puts you at a advantage its hard to explain
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

for example  someone greets him of a boat he will say hi how was your day but i have different stages of the guy as skins so after a bit he wont say anything or lets say someone is about to die a bit later on of the guy wouldn't do anything might even help or watch from the shadows more early on might find help for the guy being attacked or stangdup for him

 

 

 

 

i have more skins

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Character Name: soul light
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 40
Physical Description: is a black cold soul with no evil at first i will change my skin multiple times as he starts to regain his memory
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states he is 10,000 years old and was banished by god, firstly that is far too old for a human and secondly please use lore appropriate information. 

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character Fear Response must be an addition to your character's personality, the fear of death is too natural.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your skin cannot include excessive noise shading, please change this.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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