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Master Monkey

By Master Monkey

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Master Monkey#6715
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Don't try and make your character the "main character" (unless you are) and say it a battle scenario, "I pull out my 50 foot flame sword which kills you instantly." Also just go along with what is happening like you where actually there and not pulling stuff out if your butt.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It can ruin the experience, joy, and surprise of what happens not just for you but for everyone. Also it can give you an unfair advantage if its something like a raid on you or something.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example:  

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

 

(idk what im supposed to do so I hope this is right) My response:

"I'm here on the behalf of the king, you wouldn't happen to know him would you? He sent me here to find a witch." The hag gives you a look of disgust as you feel a shiver down your spine. "Is everything ok....." The air becomes so thick you can't breath you try your best to get even a bit of air but alas its too late...

Character Name: Giraudus
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Short blonde hair, blue eyes, red robes, 5'11, lean muscle, weighs 180 pounds, wears boots, has a sword
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AnimeWolf0080

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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