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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is when you use stuff you were informed about out of character in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Its when you do something unfair or unrealistic such as making someone do something through chat or emotes.
    Status: Denied

"I am here to try to get information on someone who I have been searching for because of what they have done to me."

 

Character Name: Bonetda
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: 4 foot 3 inches ,strong, they have on a black shirt, they have a orange left eye and a pink right one and weigh 210 pounds
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • Your Height is not lore appropriate for a High Elf 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks include that they like Video Games and Santa, these things do not exist in LOTC, please change this.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/ 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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