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    Discord: chris5452 (Belial)
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I tend to think about what to write, and how to make it as expressive and non-powergaming as possible, which tends to take a bit, unfortunately. I heavily dislike powergaming, and try to avoid it as much as possible, and if another player forces emotes, I see the powergaming as missing completely.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowledge OOC stays OOC, IC is IC. If my character doesn't know something I know Irl, then I won't act on it.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Haerion
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Height: 175 cm
Weight: 100 kg
Hair: Medium length white silvery hair
Eye colour: Deep Purple
Outfit: Deep red tunic, black breeches, black boots
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


~A figure in a heavy, dark cloak with deep purple accents on the inside, would turn his attention towards the Hag and a grin would form on his lips, and he would take down his hood and reveal his shoulder length white silvery hair, and his purple eyes would observe the tent as he moves to sit down, revealing a black half plate with a deep red tunic beneath it, black breeches, and black boots. As he sits in front of the Hag, he would take his weapons, and put them on the ground besides him, as he feel they wouldn't be needed at this point in time, and then starts speaking with a slightly rough voice~ "My name is Haerion Khamul" ~He'd say with a smile~ "And I am traveling the world, exploring and learning new things. I knew from a young age that I wanted to go out and see the world, and learn about it for what it is." ~He would smile wistfully for a moment~ "In the home of my people, we're somewhat isolated from the wider world, and I wanted to know what's out there." ~He would look up with a smile on his face, then he would turn his attention back to the hag~ "I began preparing for this many years ago, learning how to survive in the wilds, how to hunt and skin animals, cooking the meat, and conserving it the best way possible. And of course, how to fight, so I wouldn't be defenseless, both with various weapons, as well as a bit of magic." ~He would take a breath as he pauses for a moment~ "I, however took a heavy interest in smithing, the process of taking ores and turning them into fuctional tools, is something that I enjoy, even though it is hard work, but then I don't have many issues with finding work if I need money or a place to stay." ~Gestures to his weapons, which includes two well made daggers, a bastardsword, a decent looking longbow with a full quiver, and what looks to be smithing tools~ "I've made those myself, and I don't mind bartering my skills to a smith for shelter and coin for a few days. It's hard, but honest work, and I enjoy it, and I meet a lot of new people and hear a lot of different interesting things about cultures" ~He would look at the Hag with a grin on his face, his purple eyes looking directly at her~
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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Keep in mind, emotes aren’t started or ended with the tilda ~
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use Magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use Magic  until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
     
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @.hiccup to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Keep in mind, emotes aren’t started or ended with the tilda ~
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use Magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use Magic  until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
     
  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

My discord is @.hiccup if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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