chaosjosh

After further review, your application has been placed onto pending. Do not fear! You are not denied, you have up to 24 hours to make all the necessary edits to this application to be accepted. And during this time, you can reach out to me or any other member of the Application Team for assistance, to further your chances of success! Below you will find the list of edits that must be made in order to be accepted onto the server in the allotted time.

• Your definitions are incorrect. Go ahead and take another look at the rules, you can find them there. Just make sure not to plagiarize! 
• Your backstory is too short! It must include a reference to current accepted lore on the server as well as tell your character's personal history up until this point!
• Your description must detail what your character looks like, I would suggest describing what other characters would see when looking upon him as well as perhaps his physical attributes to further add depth to 'James'.
• Your interesting facts section must include at least one fault.

I would suggest taking a look at our Wiki as well as our New Player Discord to help as well, considering both are viable sources of information on our server. The New Player Discord has many dedicated and hard working players, both new and old, who seek to help you find your place in our little corner of the world here.

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

LotC Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

You are still missing a few key components from your application. You have up to 24 hours so do not fear. Just take a look back at the list I threw your way and feel free to edit it at your leisure.

Quick update friend, your skin is not to be used on LotC. So you'll need to find a new skin to use!

i have a new skin

The skin is a good update, however you need to add more information to your backstory. I would also suggest looking over your spelling and grammar. Your description still requires more information, your interesting facts still requires one fault, and your definitions are still incorrect. You have more time to make these edits and you can still reach out to me if needed.

After the final review your application has been denied. You have the basis laid down for a great character, but you were unable to get it through on your first attempt! Do not fear, you are not denied forever! You can post a new application and will be reviewed again, offering you the chance to go through this process once more! If you have any questions, please feel free to contact myself or any other member of the Application Team as it's our job to help you get on the server and have fun. Below you will find a list of information you are required to edit for your next application to be accepted!

• Your definitions are incorrect. Go ahead and take another look at the rules, you can find them there. Just make sure not to plagiarize! 
• Your backstory is too short! It must include a reference to current accepted lore on the server as well as tell your character's personal history up until this point!
• Your description must detail what your character looks like, I would suggest describing what other characters would see when looking upon him as well as perhaps his physical attributes to further add depth to 'James'.
• Your interesting facts section must include at least one fault.

Also, don't be afraid to join the New Player Discord! I hope to see another application from you soon!