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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: not rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unrealistic and making a godly character that can kill everything
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

i say adventure taking land and becoming the most fearsome warriors out there.

Character Name: luke
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: the eyes of my character are green. hair is flat and coming down the sides. hair colour is black his body build is medium his height unknown. medium.
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AlphaMoist

Changed Status to Denied

 

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many mistakes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Character Biography states that “LotC” is the name of a kingdom. This is not the case. LotC is just what the server is called. There are many different kingdoms and cities within the server that can be referred to instead.

 

→ I would like you to include the skin file along with your screenshot so I may examine it more closely.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

Just because you are denied does not mean it’s the end of the world, don’t worry. I suggest you read more information about the server and read the application very carefully and thoroughly. You may apply again anytime afterwards. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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