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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Your character doesn’t know everything you do. If someone’s plotting behind closed doors, don’t have your character magically sense it.
    And Think less “How do I win this?” and more “How does this scene evolve?” The best moments come from tension, not dominance.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Ask yourself: “What does my character actually know right now?” Not what you know. If the group found clues to a murder, your character can only act on what they’ve personally seen or been told.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Cherry elowen
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Height: 142 cm
Weight: 44 kg
Build: normal
Skin: Pale ivory
Hair: platinum-blonde with faint pink tone
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No pink hair.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No pink hair.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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