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Chiboski
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is where someone takes knowledge from your/someone's character without learning it via roleplay example: plr1: so your mother died when you were born? plr2: how did you know? i thought noone knew! (plr2's bio sais that his mother died when he w
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is where someone would kill a person/animal in an instant example: plr1: *he'd chop of the boars head in a clean cut*
    Status: Denied

Meldor Marteinsson, born in 1702 in a place called haense, with a very poor family, one day when he just became 13 the family went on a trip to go get a new life but forgot about Meldor Marteinsson, so he had to go and live his life on the streets with a cat that would come by every now and then but one day the cat disappeared so he went on his own little journey to find the cat but didint manage to find it but instead got himself in a bit of trouble with the blacksmith who was making swords at the time for a future war of the two emperors, 4 years later the war has begun and it the middle of the war, Meldor Marteinsson tried his very best to survive so he could try and meet his family again.


Character Name: Meldor Marteinsson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: brown hair, green eyes, 5'6 tall, a bit weak, like fishing and exploring places.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

>>Your Power-gaming and Meta-gaming definitions dont quite meet LotC requirements! please look those over in our wiki here to better your understanding of them!

>>in your Biography, you did not use proper sentence structure. Please make sure to have your Biography contain at least 5 Sentences

>> your Skin does not meet the criteria for skins on LotC. Please refer to Skin Archive if you are in need of a more appropriate skin.

>>in your Interesting facts, you repeat “as left behind by his family by mistake because his family trying to get a new life in a different place.” and “Likes fishing”. Please ensure that you do not copy things from other parts of your app into your interesting facts. they must be original. 


 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (SaltyStormtrooper#7987) or by /msg (Saltyolog) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Your application has been


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The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

please make sure to fix the following issues when you re apply

 

>>Your Power-gaming and Meta-gaming definitions dont quite meet LotC requirements! please look those over in our wiki here to better your understanding of them!

>>in your Biography, you did not use proper sentence structure. Please make sure to have your Biography contain at least 5 Sentences. 

>> your Skin does not meet the criteria for skins on LotC. Please refer to Skin Archive if you are in need of a more appropriate skin.

>>in your Interesting facts, you repeat “as left behind by his family by mistake because his family trying to get a new life in a different place.” and “Likes fishing”. Please ensure that you do not copy things from other parts of your app into your interesting facts. they must be original. 

 

You may reapply immediately, however please make the above changes before you do so

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Saltystormtrooper#7987), my forum account, or on the server (Saltyolog).

 

You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community.

 

https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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