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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Just by simply reading the rules should be enough to know how to avoid powergaming. I would avoid powergaming by just keeping the roleplay going smoothly, just following up on what the other person is doing
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay just by ruining the roleplay for the other players, just by interrupting the rp session, not just this, but it removes the fun of the player actually enjoying the roleplay, as you are taking advantage of knowing future actions
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Shu
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Tan colored skin, dark curly hair, with dark brown colored eyes, a dark robe with gold hints, around 5'5, 150lbs
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: The swampy aroma fills my nose, my eyes darting around the tent. My mind is at a loss, taking in the new environment, till my gaze reaches the lady in front of me.--"Who are you?" I look at the cushion she gestured at, and with a wary mind, I take a seat, not taking my eyes off hers. The air feels thick, thick enough to make my mind foggy. "Story?...I-I don't know what you mean? Before we continue to speak, could I at least be aware of whom I'm speaking to?" I say fidgeting with my hands as I peek outside the tent with the corner of my eye.
 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked, please adjust to have elven ears instead of human ones! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked, please adjust to have elven ears instead of human ones! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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