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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would alter my phrasing to say, "I attempt to swing my sword at the man.", rather than, "I swing my sword and cleave the man's head off."
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming breaks the logic of roleplay through someone knowing something that they shouldn't. The information isn't earned and the writing becomes less credible because of it.
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Character Name: Oathbreaker Solomon
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: Solomon stands at 6'3, his build more lanky than brawny for your average plate wearing knight. He has bright blonde hair and cloudy greyed-out eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


He's quiet as he comes into the tent, his gaze washing over the floating candles. The sight alone puts him slightly off balance, which is soon followed up by the hag's recognition of him, despite the two having never met before. Solomon eyes her through the slits of his helmet, knowing better than to question a knowing old hag with candles suspended in the air around her. He sits cross-legged, pulling his helmet off and placing it beside the cushion. The steel he wears on his back is worn, the smell of ash forever stuck to it. A red shoulder cape draped down his arm, slightly tattered. Although his longsword is clean, it is clearly battle tested. These things alone are enough to tell her a story. He's one of the Farfolk, someone who's come from foreign lands and has seen combat for many years.

His kind, slightly washed out eyes, bear into her as he begins. Solomon's tone radiates warmth, though his telling of his story is almost mournful. "I come from a life of duty and commitment. I grew up in a town far away from here, and learned about the Daemon of Fate and Conviction, Azdromoth. As early as I could remember I was fed his story by those who'd worshipped him. Their telling of his story, as well as Eresar's was... limited, but I didn't know any better." He pauses, his gauntlet resting on his calf. "I aspired to become one of his knights, to carry out his will despite knowing I would never come to meet him on this plane. That I did. I was once able to wield his flames. I coated my sword with them and smoke rose from my armor whenever I found myself fighting in his name."

A soft breath is released as he prepares to continue. With a slightly tight voice, he goes on. "When I turned twenty nine, I found out the rest about him -- filled in the gaps. I learned of his corruption, and no longer did I wish that I had scales on my face." Every word carried out of his mouth is firm, but when he says this next, he finds his next sentence stuck in his throat. Finally, he summons the strength to utter it.

"I denounced him."

There's a long beat of silence at that. He's unable to look the old hag in the eyes. He wonders if she knew all of this already, if this was to see the limits of what he was willing to reveal. The weight of the title Oathbreaker was heavy on his shoulders. It earned him no respect, no trust. "I lost his flames not long after, and then I wandered. I wandered and I wandered and soon I realized I wanted to expand my view of the world. As I traveled across the lands, I realized the mistake I'd made. I'd felt so betrayed after my disillusion that I was too blind to appreciate The King Who Is. Through divinity and wisdom, he was redeemed of his acts of conquest, greed, and ego. I realized my anger shouldn't have been aimed at him, but the people who sold me a fractured story. I wanted to find the truth. I never wanted to be lied to again."

He's a little more confident speaking, now. "...I want to reignite the flame. I am Oathbreaker Solomon. I want to one day become a Herald."

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your Skin must have their face visible when applying! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your Skin must have their face visible when applying! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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