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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By act realistically. Giving chances the other to react and act fairly according the action given/taken.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because your character getting out-of-character information that advantages the character to use it on in-game.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Johan Clarkwood
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Height : 178 cm
Weight : 78 kg
Hair : Brown
Eye Colour : Brown
Outfit : Dark clothes with brown pants
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
I hesitate before sitting, brushing moss from my cloak. My tone is soft, almost weary.  
"My story? It’s one of exile. I was cast out from the green lands I once called home, accused of crimes I never committed. The swamp welcomed me when no one else would. Perhaps that’s why I’m here… perhaps the rot and ruin mirror what I’ve become. If you’ve been expecting me, then maybe fate has finally decided to speak."

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it


- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions in third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it


- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions in third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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