clone_bladeYT

Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes.

You can always reapply with the right corrections!

Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:

⚘ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

⚘ Your Roleplay Definition is a little short, please add more detail.

⚘ Your Character Biography is a little short, please add more detail. It also must be in the 3rd person. 

⚘ Your Physical Description is a little short, please add more detail.

This can be your persona’s height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. 

The description needs to be purely physical. Try to avoid describing your persona’s personality.

⚘ Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short, please add more detail.

It needs to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

⚘ Your Character Achievement Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

Please explain why and what your character wants to achieve.

⚘ Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

⚘ Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.

If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701

Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord