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    Discord: Callum Zimmerman#2935
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Is when someone who is playing as their character gets outside information and proceeds to act upon that information while the character is not aware of that
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: is when someone does something that is not possible by their current character or by creating a character with godly powers
    Status: Denied

Korsarro Khan was born in a old Mongolian settlement the Holy Orenian and his mother Anastasia Khan was of common birth but was cast out by her family because she was inlove with a man that her parents didn't approve of, His father Dublia Khan was of common birth who was the man that Anastasia parents didn't approve of so they both decided to run away and live together. Korsarro Khan had no siblings and had very few friends in his life, his father taught him the ways of hunting and fighting with the sword and bow, his mother taught him how to properly write and speak Mongolian. Korsarro Khan had great life experiences with his loving mother and father, when he turned 16 he was gifted with his own set of armor along with a sword, bow, and a strong horse to ride while hunting. When he was 18 he lost his parents to 5 bandits, he and his father were returning home from hunting when they saw smoke at their home, they hurried home to find his mother dead and bandits raiding their home, Dublia Khan enraged rushed towards the bandits only injuring one, but was cut down and only for Korsarro Khan to kill one of the bandits with a precise bow shot to the chest. At the age of 20 he was a fine warrior for the Orenian Empire and made many friends in the army but he would slowly lose his friends to the many battles he fought in. At the age of 25 He left the army with honor to find the remaining 4 bandits who killed his parents or the bandits children to bring peace to his parents souls. Korsarro Khan fought in the war between the Orenian empire and the Federation of MokhUrak lost many of his fellow soldiers to the war.  He was also in the war between the Holy Orenian Empire and the Free State of Sutica, he was tasked with capturing the Trade King, Crowin Alstreim, he was able yo successfully capture the Trade king and was praised by his superiors.


Character Name: KorSarro Khan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Traditional Mongolian Armor, blue eyes, black hair, muscular build, 180cm, 160pds
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. 

 

Korsarro Khan would be confused as to why this stranger approached him. Korsarro Khan would put his left hand on the hilt of his sword for he doesn't this stranger. Korsarro Khan would say to the stranger "Who are you". The man would say "I am a fine gentleman who welcomes many newcomers like you to this city and ask why they have come here". he would say with a kind smile. Korsarro Khan would answer why he cam to this city " I came to this city to go on grand adventures and to honor my mother and father who were killed by bandits. I will kill those bandits and finally let my mother and father rest in peace".

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 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

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Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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