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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when the player acts out of character. For example: (This is OOC, and has nothing to do with the RP).
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when a character in a roleplay is ridiculously powered to the point where it makes no sense, or is unbalanced to the other person's power.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

She smiled, reluctantly, back at the man and replied: “Hello. I’m here to explore the city, and gain new knowledge about new places I visit.” She limped past the man, ignoring some of the stares the people are giving at her limp, and thanked the Aenguls that they couldn’t see the long scar on her leg. Who knows what ghastly statements would be brought up then? She thought to herself and she walked over to one of the seated traders where she bought something she always longed to have: a sword. 

Character Name: Alicia Oakwood
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: Dark blue eyes, dirty blonde long hair, 5'6", 140lb, limp in her left leg from an old injury and attire is a red silk dress
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please refer to our Wiki page for help.
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Physical Description does not match your skin.

  • Furthermore, your Skin is not up to Lord of the Craft standards. Please refer to our Skin Archive next time for assistance.
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks should contain traits and quirks, not just likes/dislikes. 

  • Your Character Biography has many issues:

    • You mention her birthplace being Caras Eldar, which is impossible given her age. Adding to that, Caras Eldar is from Atlas, another map.

    • ‘Avery Birch, Peter Snow, and James Snow’ are unrealistic names for elves. 

    • An orc who was previously very friendly towards someone attacking because  ‘he accidentally went too long without sating his blood lust’ is also unrealistic. 

    • You mention the Kingdom of Gladewynn, which also doesn’t match up with the current timeline.


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

 

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