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Bjorn Al-shaheed Muhammad Walsh

By Bjorn Al-shaheed Muhammad Walsh

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by not doing it idk
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: because it cuases unfair advantages when in competition
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Bjorn al-shaheed Muhammad Walsh
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: 6'3 236 lbs blond brownish hair blue eyes who wears medival style clothes
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I come from Mumbaiparisamsterdam a town in north Scandinavia its a logging town there I learned how to use an axe ever since then ive traveled ton varing logging towns collecting different types of wood to sell to other people in towns in the area

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Hiccup392

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory is using real life information that we do not use on this server! This is a fantasy roleplay server! 
  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page.

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.

 

  • In your Roleplay Scenario & Background, please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what your character is doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 

  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

  • Please provide more actions to your Roleplay Response.

 




 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @.hiccup to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hiccup392

 

Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory is using real life information that we do not use on this server! This is a fantasy roleplay server! 
  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page.

  •  

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.

  •  

  • In your Roleplay Scenario & Background, please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what your character is doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

  • Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 

  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

  • Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

  • Please provide more actions to your Roleplay Response.

  •  

  • Your skin file is not uploaded correctly, please screenshot the skin or send the download file for review.
  • This name does not follow your character's race naming conventions. If you need help here is a name generator. → https://donjon.bin.sh/fantasy/name/#type=com;com=human_male

My discord is @.hiccup if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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