CommanderApple1

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are on the right track, but not quite there yet. Examples are recommended to ensure we know that you understand. To check out our metagaming and powergaming rules for the server, please look at this link. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your character biography needs to have at least one lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a location, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

• Your character biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your character biography uses a common character trope! Bandit attacks are a common trope. Please change this.

• Your roleplay scenario response is a bit off. It should be in third person with at least one action and one bit of dialog.

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You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message AudryTheOddity! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at AudTheOdd#1560

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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