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Cornet
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: Cocoisreall
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By avoiding to make your character too particularly strong, and keeping their abilities as fair as possible. As well as keeping YOURSELF into the right spirit of the roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something in favor of only yourself while your roleplayed character doesn't know themselves can lead to events not meant to happen and cause potential problems.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Cornet (T is silent)
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Cornet is a 5'8 man with heterochromia, blue and brown. mid-length calico hair, left arm prosthetic, goggles, big boots and steampunk vibe.
Roleplay Scenario:

I'm going to write my description here because the other box is too small.

 

5'8 young man with heterochromia, having one eye brown and one light blue, he has mid-length calico-colored hair and engineer protection goggles. He wears a mostly blue long-sleeved shirt that cover his right arm, with a brass cog to adorn his shoulder. He also wears a brown glove with exposed fingertips for grip. His other arm is mostly mechanical, made of brass and glass, from a past injury with his machines, not his most functioning part but he lives with it. Over his shirt is a brown overall, unbuttoned on his right side. It's decorated with a lot of brass buttons and accessories, from cogwheels to chains. And for last he wears big boots with big brass buttons.

 

 

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 

"Ah... I'm just-" I pause as i awkwardly take my seat, subtly analyzing the elderly lady, "I am but a poor engineer, ma'am. Merely expeditioning for copper, what would you wish of knowing-?"

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please be advised the server is not  in a steam punk setting, i would advise reading the starting  materials to adjust your application accordingly 
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub/ 
 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! in the third person This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No calico hair,.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please be advised the server is not  in a steam punk setting, i would advise reading the starting  materials to adjust your application accordingly 
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub/ 
 

  • Please provide a valid Java minecraft username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat! 

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! in the third person This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No calico hair,.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub


 

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