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Blue___

By Blue___

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: whatifmyhairwasblue#3995
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you control your player rather then letting the player control themselves
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: overpowering your character
    Status: Denied

“my god this city is big!” he steps off the boat “well how am i gonna find him” he pulls out the paper the old man gave him of the description of the man he's looking for “guess ill start by getting into the city” Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began.

Character Name: Blue
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Height: 5' 11" Weight: 180 Posture: perfect Build: slim his legs are very long making up most if his height Hair: dark blue Eyes: a gray blue
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LordScisso

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Defenition of Meta Gaming is incorrect.
  • Your Defenition of Power gaming while technically correct does not go into enough detail. 
  • In your Character Description, characters are only allowed to have natural hair colors, which can be diffrent from race to race. Humans do not naturally have blue hair.
  • While your Character traits/quirks are alright, but lacking. If you plan to reapply, please go into further details.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario some how ended up backwards. Your response to the man is supposed to come after what the gentleman says. If you choose to reapply, I suggest going into further detail here as well, and correcting this error. 
  • Your Bio is not long enough, and as a result does not cover enough information. If you intend to apply again, please read the requirements for each of the applications fields, and use the resources at your disposal.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Lordscisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

 

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