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    Referral: Reddit
    Discord: anatano_takai
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by reporting the player
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its unrealistic and unfair against others
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Cirilla
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: pale skin, white long hair and white glowy eyes, pointy ears, 175 cm tall, 60 kg slighty muscly in pretty earth toned elf clothes
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

The pale, pretty elf with long white hair sat across from the hag’s crooked table, folding her hands as the fire crackled between them.
She lifted her chin and said, “Most of my people were hunted down for our resources, and I barely escaped with my life.”
As she spoke, she brushed her hair back and stared into the flames, remembering the screams and silence that followed.
“I grieved for a long time,” she continued softly, “but I am done living only in sorrow.”
She rose to her feet and took a step forward, her voice steadier now, saying, “I want to start a new life and use what I am to help others.”
The hag watched closely as the elf bowed her head, the decision clear in both her words and her actions.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • IGN
    • you have provided a bedrock IGN, please provide a JAVA IGN
  • Roleplay Sample
    • minimum 6 sentences
    • written in third person
    • must have dialogue and at least 2 actions
    • have your character tell the hag her story



 



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajessto let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

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My discord is @tarajessif you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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