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Crowleyman_

By Crowleyman_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using ooc info to do stuff ic
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing unrealistic things, making your character do overpowered stuff
    Status: Denied

I tell him that i'm loooking for nothing like those things. I continue by asking him if he knows a place where i can rest after my travels and perhaps somewhere i can find a warm meal and some drinks.

Character Name: Alliard Terpin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Slender and pale with blue eyes and dark hair, neatly clothed. Average height.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Dr Green#4255].  If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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