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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: daan123vs #6088
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Saying information you shouldn't know from a roleplay perspective
    For example: your friend is kidnapped, he tells you via disc. You share this in roleplay which you dont know about.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being too strong for the good of the roleplay and the fun of others
    For example: shrugging normally lethal damage off like a bullet to the head or a boulder to the chest
    Status: Denied

wealth ofcourse i have the finesed goods in the land. you wish to buy. "shows items"

 

only 2.99 for this beautifull pocket watch. owh sorry i am losing myself. let me introduce myself balduin beverberry owner of the finesed goods in the land. i have traveld far and whide for make it to this distant land. I bring with mee gifts from a far away place. wishing to make buisness and steal the wheel of comerce.


Character Name: Balduin Beverberry
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 83
Physical Description: about 2.60 feet, grey eyes. brown hear almost always wairs a tuxido green or bordeau red, pocket watch in his left pocket
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

Our standards on what constitutes as “meme roleplay” can be found on this post: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/188960-roleplay-quality-standards/

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

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