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Daldoriz
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: MrEDog
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming occurs when someone has their character perform incredible feats that are far outside of the bounds of their character, often to the detriment of others trying to roleplay, and can come across as wanting to be "better" than everyone else or falling into the "chosen one" trope, which can push others into the role of NPC, when everyone should be the main character of their own story.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming occurs when someone uses knowledge from outside the context of their character that gives them an advantage within the game itself. This can bring roleplay too much into the real world and can mess up real world friendships, which I have seen occur within games of DnD.
    Status: Denied

(Note: I couldn't find anything in the lore document about required skin tone, I am fully willing to make him not green lol)

 

Ruhn was born in a small Elven village to Bryq Sr. (father) and Pesh (mother) under the name Bryq Jr. When he was 10 his entire village was ransacked overnight and his people being massacred for their precious resources. When the aggressors came into his house, his parents sacrificed themselves to protect him, with his father's dying words being a single word "Run". As he ran, he made a prayer to anyone that might be listening to help, without really expecting anyone to answer. The fires of his village burned his skin and took his eyes from him, but his prayers were heard by Tahariae, who looked upon him and helped him find his way. He made his way to the nearby city of Caurost where he was taken in by a blacksmith named Othur Korlynn. When asked what his name was, he could only hear the final words of his father echoing in his head, so he said his name was Ruhn. And even though he was very weak, Buboc recognized his potential and gave him a magical hammer that would allow him to craft anyway. He spent the next 8 years training under Buboc in his base of operations until Ruhn was ready to go out into the world. He would spend his days trying to uphold Tahariae's Justice wherever he went, helping people hold on to hope wherever he went.


Character Name: Ruhn
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 5'10", green skin, black hair and eyes, usually wears medium armor, has a blindfold over his eyes. https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D50008746/
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Thank you." Ruhn slowly said, hesitant but ready to listen, as he reaches into his bag and offers her a piece of the bread he carries with him.  "The place any of us come from does not truly matter does it? Only what we carry with us and where we seek to go now. As for what I hope to make of myself, is simply a kind person, for that is why I do anything I do." He says this strongly, and watches them closely, hoping for a hint of their nature, and ready to offer aid or reach for his hammer as needed.
 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Background Story
    • I assume you have permission from this friend who invited you to the server to use their character. I would like you to remove everything after arriving to Caurost. You will be able to create your story once you are on the server :)
  • Skin/Character Description
    • indeed, he cannot be green. Here is a wood elf description and a link to some ready to use skins if needed
      • Wood Elf

        Skin: dark pigments, olive to cinnamon to dark brown

        Hair: brown, olive, black

        Eye: green, gold, brown, blue (uncommon)

        Height: 5’0” - 6’2” ft

        Weight: 100lbs - 240lbs


      • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive





 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajess to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Background Story
    • I assume you have permission from this friend who invited you to the server to use their character. I would like you to remove everything after arriving to Caurost. You will be able to create your story once you are on the server :)
  • Skin/Character Description
    • indeed, he cannot be green. Here is a wood elf description and a link to some ready to use skins if needed
      • Wood Elf

        Skin: dark pigments, olive to cinnamon to dark brown

        Hair: brown, olive, black

        Eye: green, gold, brown, blue (uncommon)

        Height: 5’0” - 6’2” ft

        Weight: 100lbs - 240lbs

      • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

My discord is @tarajess if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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