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Sombra

By Sombra

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowalge you know but your character does not. Exmple I am jeff and I dont know math but i use even though i never learned.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is where you dont give a choose example. Jeff blasts Jermy killing him(in this i dont give a choose.)Jeff blasts Jermy Trying to kill him(in this i give a choose)
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Sombra
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: My character is tall with pale skin and a dark cloak. My head is shaped with a strong jaw line. I also have red eyes and brown hair.
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Aquaquean

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Ø  Your grammar and spelling makes it difficult to understand what you are trying to say, particularly in your metagaming and powergaming definitions. Please try your best to correct this.

 

Ø  You say that your character can control shadows and has the ability to use powerful dark magic, however, you may not make a character who can already use magic. If you want to learn magic once you have been whitelisted, you may find a magic teacher in game and ask them to teach you. 

 

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please expand it to at least two paragraphs.

 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.


Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. Being weak to an everyday sword does not really count as a flaw. These facts/traits should be at least five-word sentences. 

 

Ø Your skin does not fit the dark elf race, as dark elves have grey skin. Please edit this or find another, more fitting skin. The LoTC Skin Archive on the forum is there for use and for inspiration.
 

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The server wiki page has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our New Player Discord - Where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.


 

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Aquaquean

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Ø  I have denied this application as you have submitted a new one.

 

Please feel free to contact me here on the forums, or on my discord (Aqua#5363) if you have any questions regarding your application.


 

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