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Sombra

By Sombra

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using knowledge you have outside of the role play.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is giving no choose to the other people as to your attack.
    Status: Denied

                 My height would be 5”10 and I have a cat. I am sad a lot of the time. I am pretty anti-social with a lot of anger. My mom and dad left me as a baby on the door of some random people. I was very unpopular as a child and that made me very anger all the time.

               Though the older I got the more anger I had inside. I like food a lot because I’m always wanting something new. I like to play with my cat. I love using and making swords. I am very skilled in combat but I am foolish. I try never to let my anger takeover. All I want is to be peaceful and friendly to all.

Character Name: Sombra
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: I am short with a strong jawline. I have red eyes that strike fear into others.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ø  Your powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

 

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please expand it to at least two paragraphs.

 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.


Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. Being able to be killed with any weapon does not count as a weakness. I noticed you had some good flaws in your character biography, perhaps you could put them down in your interesting facts as well. 

 

Ø Your character’s age does not make them old for an elf. Elves can live up to 1000 years, although they begin to go crazy and insane sometime into their 700s or 800s. Considering that elves are only considered an adult at the age of 50 in most elven cultures, 200 years old is not very old at all.

 

Ø I also want to note that you do not need to make a new application when you correct your pending application. Simply edit your current application, and send me a message here in the forums or on my discord (Aqua#5363) once you are happy with your changes. 

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. 

 

The wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our discord where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

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Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. This could be a place of birth or where your character currently lives. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.


Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. Being able to be killed with any weapon does not count as a weakness. Having a lot of stress in your life is also not a character flaw, it’s simply a factor of their environment. I noticed you had some good flaws in your character biography, perhaps you could put them down in your interesting facts as well. 

 

Ø You said that your character is very old in your interesting facts, but this is incorrect due to their age. Elves can live up to a thousand years, although they begin to go crazy sometime into their 700s or 800s. Considering that elves are only considered an adult at the age of 50 in most elven cultures, 200 years old is not very old at all.

 

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through discord once you’ve made said changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. 

 

The wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer back to this. You can also join our discord where you can ask questions to our Application Team, and meet other server players.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

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The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

 

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography. This could be a place of birth or where your character currently lives. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.


Ø You must include at least one flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits. Being able to be killed with any weapon does not count as a weakness. Having a lot of stress in your life is also not a character flaw, it’s simply a factor of their environment. I noticed you had some good flaws in your character biography, perhaps you could put them down in your interesting facts as well. 

 

Ø You said that your character is very old in your interesting facts, but this is incorrect due to their age. Elves can live up to a thousand years, although they begin to go crazy sometime into their 700s or 800s. Considering that elves are only considered an adult at the age of 50 in most elven cultures, 200 years old is not very old at all.

 

Please make the above changes in your next application.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.


 

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