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By DanTheMan

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Dan The Man #1318
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Receiving or acquiring information out of character and then proceeding to use it to your advantage while in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the use of overpowering/godly actions that cannot be beaten or forcing other characters to perform actions they don't wish to do.
    Status: Denied

I only seek an opportunity to redeem myself and prove my worth, kind sir.

Character Name: Rowan Angwin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Blonde hair blue eyes. Is relatively tall and muscular. Is most often seen wearing a green shirt with a brown cloak.
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions your character is studying Alchemy. While it is fine for your character to study Alchemy, they cannot know Alchemy. Please clarify that they do not know Alchemy.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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