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    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by treating everyone fair.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: ruins the fun of the game.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Apollo Astroscopus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 16
Physical Description: snow-white hair ,eyes of blue color, 6'4, 155 pounds, wears a tight-fitting black shirt sports tan baggy training pants with a black belt.
Roleplay Scenario:

### Enhanced Backstory and Scenario: Apollo Astropocus, "The Star"

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**Character:** Apollo Astropocus, 18 years old, known in Solstice City as "The Star." In addition to his celestial powers, Apollo is a skilled martial artist. With his lean, athletic frame and rigorous training, he has become one of the most agile fighters in the city. His fighting style is fluid yet precise, mirroring the movement of constellations across the sky. He wears a tight-fitting black shirt that highlights his wiry strength and tan, loose training pants tied with a black belt, allowing him the freedom to move as seamlessly in battle as he does when stargazing.

### Expanded Backstory

Apollo’s journey began with solitude, but as he grew older, he discovered a way to channel his inner strength through martial arts. Training in solitude on the cliffsides and city rooftops, Apollo developed a fighting style inspired by the constellations he so often mapped. He would leap with the agility of Orion, strike with the precision of Scorpius, and move like the fluid arc of Ursa Major across the night sky.

He quickly earned a reputation as "The Star" among those who witnessed his rare duels and street skirmishes. His mysterious blend of martial prowess and starlit powers left people awestruck and mystified. Apollo's unique connection to the stars grants him unparalleled reflexes and the ability to channel starlight into his attacks, making him nearly unstoppable in battle.

While he remains a solitary figure, his reputation has drawn the interest of Solstice City's fighters, many of whom seek him out for a challenge—or for protection against the growing threat his visions forewarn.

### Roleplay Scenario

Under the cover of night on Solstice Hill, Apollo practices his starlit techniques. With swift, calculated movements, he channels his energy, using his hands to form cosmic shapes that emit radiant trails of light. Each strike glows with the force of a miniature star. His breath is steady, controlled, his form flawless—he moves with a grace that could only be honed by years of discipline and dedication.

In the distance, Lyra watches, amazed. Apollo is her friend, but tonight she sees why the people call him "The Star."

**Lyra:** *“You know, Apollo, people in the city talk about you. They think you’re some kind of legend. But seeing you here, it’s… like you’re channeling the stars themselves.”*

**Apollo:** *(smiles slightly, lowering his fists as the light fades)* “It’s taken a long time to understand. This power—it’s not just mine. It’s the Star God’s, and I think it’s finally ready for me to use.”

He looks at Lyra, his golden eyes reflecting the night sky.

**Lyra:** *“If you’re really destined to be Celestus’s successor… maybe that’s why you’re so good. The way you fight—it’s like it was written in the stars.”*

**Apollo:** *“I’ve trained to protect, not to harm. But if my fate is to guard both the heavens and Solstice City, then I’ll become whatever the stars need me to be.”*

As they stand together, the stars pulse above, a sign of the destiny Apollo has yet to fulfill. With his unmatched martial skills and his celestial powers, Apollo Astropocus, "The Star," is ready to face whatever challenges lie ahead.

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ I would like to see a bit more in your response to the Powergaming and Metagaming question.

→ I see you have put something with Celestial Powers, Just so you know your chracter cannot know or use any magic as you have to find out in roleplay how it works.

→ Make sure to have your character respond to the old hag instead of someone totally different little confusing.

→ Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years

→ Your skin isn’t up to our server standards. Please change this, and feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive.
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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