DarkKing555

 

Due to: 

Ø Please expand your definition of roleplay on your next app 
Ø Your powergaming definition and your metagaming definition are incorrect, please fix this on your next app. You can review our wiki page about them here!  
Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of year 8, of the Second Age. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here (And please correct the length to roughly a paragraph):   

• Holy Oren Empire

• Hanseti-Ruska

• Providence

• Human Sub Forum  (You can find a bunch of events here).

• Humans

• Norland

Ø There are some grammar mistakes please fix these.
ØYour fear is too generic, and lacks a proper reason for why you have such a fear. Please change this!
Ø Your RP scenario response must be four sentences long and include an action, and it must follow the  Please fix this
Ø Your appearance does not match up with LOTC standards, we require this to ensure quality rp. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here! Or ask in the Discord
Ø You require to thoroughly explain your character's likes and dislikes about themselves. Please expand this to include proper reasoning for example "Why" their Father hates them and why this is a thing he likes about himself. Ditto for the dislikes.
Ø A stutter is not a sufficient negative trait.

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