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DarkShinobi3

DarkShinobi3

By DarkShinobi3

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: ninja man.300#1526
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i have no idea what that is
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i have no idea just want to play a fun sever and make new friends
    Status: Denied

Dark was born with a great gift and has been bullied because of it. At the ages 1-10 at school he has been bullied for his really long ears even though he lives in a elf city. When he turned 11 he was kicked out of his house and has been alone snice and has been wondering the streets of his big city. He has been kicked, punched, burned, stabbed and more through the ages 11-14. Then on his 15 birthday he meet a marital art and a lot of other ass kicking skill that will help him as he gets older. The teacher was really hard on him and he almost died a lot during training and this lasted him until he turned 18.

Character Name: Dark
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: tall around 6'2, black with long hair and ears, , blue and red eyes, weight is 145, skinny built like a body builder
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters


- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 


- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 


- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them! 

 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!


- Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is your persona Biography 

 

- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0


- Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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