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Dauniy

By Dauniy

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: dauniy#8003
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you insert your PERSONAL real-life knowledge of the roleplay and/or plot into your original character. Typically, it is information that you oc does and should not know within roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you force your actions and decisions onto another character, rather than giving them a choice you instead require that this person endures your choices.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Enyo tilts her head, listening carefully of the voice of this well-dressed stranger. Reaching towards her face, she takes her mask in hand lowering it from her lips. She spoke clearly and softly, her voice carrying a dull tone.  "I suppose you could say wealth, I am here under commission. Although, I will not be staying here longer than is needed, as entertaining as 'adventure' can be, there is work to be done." She raised her mask back over her lips and nose, nodding her head subtly and politely. "Good day sir."

Character Name: Enyo Loradan
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Enyo has hazel skin and dark brown hair, her eyes are colorless due to her blindness. She tends to wear masks as well as rags across her head.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • The Dominion of Malin was a nation within the realm of Atlas, a map that took place a few years ago. Therefore, your character could not have been born there. The current realm we are on is Almaris, although with your character's age in mind she would have been born on Arcas, the realm before our current one. Please view these pages, and change the lore in your application accordingly.
  • Since your character was born blind, please make the biography a bit more realistic. Having enhanced sences such as better hearing is not unthinkable for blind people, but this does not make your character an all-skilled fighter, they are still blind.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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