Dekathemeta

• Your powergaming definition, whilst not entirely wrong, is also lacking something. Powergaming can be something as simple as forcing an emote on someone, rather than attempting. My suggestion is that you reread up on the term.
• Your characters backstory is very plain and under developed, lacking in lore references, and is very generic. Having parents killed by bandits is quite cliche. Whilst not the be all and end all, having it the major play of a character history, story and being (being on a journey to recover an item lost from it) will result in a very lack lustre character.
  • Consider ways in which to flesh him out. At twenty four, he has had plenty of years to do things, to see places. He has been across two maps: [Arcas] where we live now, and [Atlas] where we lived before.
  • Having murdered parents can remain, as long as there is significant story and character creation beforehand.
• Your interesting facts don’t highlight Positive, neutral, and negative.
  • Being adaptable is a positive.
  • Losing a sword, whilst tecnically negative- is not a character negative. These are supposed to reflect character traits, not events that happened to him. Quick to anger, for example, is a negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Denying this on the basis of inactivity. If you do decide to reapply, please d make the above changes in your new application.