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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

• Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Keep in mind this not a Lord of the Rings server and we have our own lore

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• You will need to re-do your Character Asperations part make sure it connects with your new Bio

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/