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Demo_TANK

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: commissar babushka#9547
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: learning information in or out of the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: being a dick and forcing or using unfair or godly powers
    Status: Denied

i was born in a village not far from gondor my dad was a soldier my mom was a farmer it was nice in the beginning but when i turned three a giant army of orcs came and destroyed the village we all fled for our lives my dad died in the battle and my mom they caught her and by the time gondor arrives it was too late i spent the rest of my life living in gondor training to be a soldier and now i would die for gondor no matter what i now live in gondor alone but on guard 24/7 until i retired so im a ex soldier but still ready to fight  

Character Name: eyan baleg
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: big head blue eyes grayish hair with beard blue and silver attire high boots silver belt buckle
Roleplay Scenario:

oh hello did not see you there i've come to to have a relaxing place in the city it's been awhile since i've had a good day of sleep 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Keep in mind this not a Lord of the Rings server and we have our own lore

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • You will need to re-do your Character Asperations part make sure it connects with your new Bio

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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