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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Demon_Stage#7215
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Being out of character or in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Carrying out unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

I would say hello I came to this city too find adventure.

Character Name: Amdirthor Logon
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Skinny, Eyes red, Hair black, Height 6.4, Muscle, Handsome
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Gnomeh

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your character can't have knowledge of or know how to use magic of any kind.

  • Your skin cannot include excessive noise shading, please change this. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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